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24th Dec 2011, 11:51 AM

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Doomy on 24th Dec 2011, 11:51 AM

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Commission by SakuraBomb Please check her out and buy from her~!

Chapter One is FINALLY complete.

And yes, Kael is a dick for waiting till the last minute. xD;;


I hope you all enjoyed it so far. Feel free to comment/critique/ask questions as you please. There's always room for improvement and I've taken a few into account from what previous people have mentioned.

Anyway, this is the last time you'll be seeing Slayne and Kael (No more skirts for you, Kael!) for awhile since it's time to actually get to the real "HERO'S" side of the story introducing newer characters and more complications/conflicts. But it will get back to these two halfway through ... maybe.

I'm gonna take about two weeks off as I plan the next chapter.

There will be a Christmas picture but it might be added to the Extras page rather than on the actual comic since it'll most likely be late lmfao.

So yes!

DEMENTED will be back on January 7th. x]

Oh and I'll be working on my side-story for DEMENTED.


Kalegiro on 24th Dec 2011, 12:10 PM

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Very nice style.

Doomy on 24th Dec 2011, 2:11 PM

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Thanks. x]

N.S. on 24th Dec 2011, 12:25 PM

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Does Slayne really only have until midnight, or is Kael just making a fairy tale (Cinderella?) reference at his brother's expense? :3

Doomy on 24th Dec 2011, 2:13 PM

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Well, Kael could only 'borrow' Slayne for a limited amount of time (Let's go with almost 2 hours) which is enough for him to hear his offer.

So it's either, be Kael's bitch for the rest of his life. Or go back to the abyss for his punishment lol.


QuantumInsanity on 24th Dec 2011, 3:51 PM

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Wait, so the evil demons aren't the heroes of your story?! Darn! But seriously, I can't wait to see how things develop from here on. This is definitely a hell of a start though... literally

Doomy on 24th Dec 2011, 6:13 PM

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Aww, thanks~!

Well, they're two of the three main characters of the story.

But no, Slayne and Kael aren't heroes, in fact they're sort of the villains. ouo ;;;

yi3345 on 24th Dec 2011, 6:16 PM

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I actually really enjoyed how this turned out, the first chapter was very infomative. I don't really remember how the old version was now, but I'm sure thie one inproved a bunch you did ver very well on the pages. and I enjoyed reading them and seeing the very pretty art. it's detailed and colorful. so I'm very happy you shared this! and I can read it so thank you so very much! and I will look forward to more pages when you get back. ^-^

Doomy on 26th Dec 2011, 1:42 PM

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Aww thanks, bby!

Yeah, old-version wasn't that great and art was horrendous but I'm glad I decided to remake/reboot this series.
Even though each and every page made me want to rage and whine about how long it takes to color lmfao.

Anyway! Thank you! I love your art as well! So cute and pretty ~

clovermandefleur on 7th Jan 2012, 3:12 PM

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you should post some of the old comics i would really like to see what they lokked like